Once again, this chapter was a problem. I decided the number of days Beth would stay on this planet, but with absolutely no idea of what she would be going to do.
It was one of the most difficult chapters to write with the one on Proxyterra. How to tell things as late as possible? I don’t know if I succeeded.
So Beth is stuck on Dalygaran. At this moment of the story, I have no idea of what will be happening up there. I just would like that the third part had 4 chapter. But do I have so much… Continue Reading
Here is the end of part 2. Our traveling mind is now in a body in the very depths of the universe. We’re on the way of the third part wich will start on Dalygaran. Dalygaran originates in the name… Continue Reading
It is the second time I write this article about chapter 8. I threw the first version to the trash. Clearly, it’s difficult for me to speak of it. So what can I say ? This chapter is from my… Continue Reading
Finally Beth travelled and saw what she has always dreamt to see. We discover more on her abilities and more on the two characters who surpervise her travels.
This chapter is the begining of part two. Beth is going to her first space travel. As it seems to be easier to me, I come back to a full dialogue.
This time I wrote the French version first. Finally it is easier for me. I am faster at writting in French and I can take time to look after the english expression I don’t know.
It has been the more difficult to write until today. And I really don’t like it. I find it bad written. It is not a one shot writting this time. I rewrite some pieces. And I am still not statisfy… Continue Reading
It is the second chapter with a dialogue. Many characters (too much ?), cause Beth meets her friends at the bar. There are couples and some singles. About ten people I think.