{"id":230,"date":"2014-06-26T00:30:42","date_gmt":"2014-06-25T20:30:42","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/annierun.net\/blog\/?p=230"},"modified":"2025-10-17T19:09:49","modified_gmt":"2025-10-17T15:09:49","slug":"a-propos-du-douxieme-chapitre-deuxieme-partie","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/annierun.net\/blog\/2014\/06\/a-propos-du-douxieme-chapitre-deuxieme-partie\/","title":{"rendered":"A propos du douxi\u00e8me chapitre &#8211; deuxi\u00e8me partie"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><!--:fr--><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">Voici donc la suite du chapitre o\u00f9 je craignais tellement de ne pas avoir assez \u00e0 dire qu&rsquo;au final il en vaut deux \ud83d\ude09<!--:--><!--:en--><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">Here is the next part of the chapter which I fear so much not to have enough to say that it is worth two of them at the end.<!--:--><!--more--><!--:fr--><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">L&rsquo;\u00e9cole\u00a0: qu&rsquo;allait-il bien pouvoir se passer \u00e0 l&rsquo;\u00e9cole\u00a0? Quelles pourraient \u00eatre les questions d&rsquo;enfants d&rsquo;ailleurs\u00a0? Il m&rsquo;\u00e9tait facile de ressentir cette intimidation r\u00e9ciproque, entre \u00c9lisa et son jeune public. Elle, un peu anxieuse de leur curiosit\u00e9, et eux, face \u00e0 un personnage myst\u00e9rieux. Mais \u00e7a devait rester des interrogations d&rsquo;enfants. Je suis pass\u00e9e au tutoiement, comme \u00e7a aurait \u00e9t\u00e9 le cas sur Terre et la premi\u00e8re question a concern\u00e9 l&rsquo;\u00e9ventualit\u00e9 d&rsquo;un petit copain. Je ne sais pas si l&rsquo;enfance a quelque chose d&rsquo;universel, mais je l&rsquo;ai consid\u00e9r\u00e9 ainsi\u00a0: les enfants sont pareils, partout.<br \/>\nEt il y a aussi une autre chose que je savais\u00a0: je ne voulais pas que l&rsquo;\u00e9change soit trop long. Il devait \u00eatre interrompu. Et ce serait une des capacit\u00e9s d\u2019\u00c9lisa qui en serait \u00e0 l&rsquo;origine. Alors est venue l&rsquo;id\u00e9e de l&rsquo;hymne \u00e0 l&rsquo;anneau d&rsquo;or qui la ferait entrer en transe et voir dans le c\u0153ur des enfants. C&rsquo;est leur ferveur qui lui a permis de voir. On peut imaginer qu&rsquo;en chantant, ils le voient cet anneau d&rsquo;or. Ils y pensent et cette image collective est venue la toucher de plein fouet, pour se retrouver sur le tableau.<\/p>\n<p>Et que ce soit du point de vue de la Terrienne \u00c9lisa ou des Dalygariens, ce don \u00e9tait inattendu.<br \/>\nNotre \u00c9lisa qui jusqu&rsquo;ici avait pris ses capacit\u00e9s comme si cela coulait de source comprend qu&rsquo;il y a quelque chose qui la d\u00e9passe. C&rsquo;est Fleur Parfum\u00e9e de la Plaine d&rsquo;Isadora qui lui rend le sourire en taquinant son mari, lui signifiant ainsi son soutien et son amiti\u00e9.<br \/>\nLogiquement, le chapitre devait s&rsquo;arr\u00eater l\u00e0. Mais, voil\u00e0, j&rsquo;ai eu envie d&rsquo;autre chose. J&rsquo;avais envie de creuser un peu cot\u00e9 Commandant.<br \/>\nLe voil\u00e0 donc qui d\u00e9barque chez Etoile et Fleur pour emmener \u00c9lisa dans un p\u00e9riple ext\u00e9rieur\u00a0: \u00e0 la fameuse Grande Cascade dont avait parl\u00e9 les enfants. Ce t\u00eate \u00e0 t\u00eate devait cimenter entre ces deux personnages qui avaient si mal commenc\u00e9s ensembles, un r\u00e9chauffement certain. Le plongeon qu&rsquo;il impose \u00e0 \u00c9lisa sera le seul moment o\u00f9 elle lui en voudra vraiment.<br \/>\nIl reprend son r\u00f4le d&rsquo;instructeur en lui apprenant \u00e0 nager comme un Dalygarien. L\u00e0 je dois dire que je me suis pay\u00e9e un r\u00eave\u00a0: nager longtemps sous l&rsquo;eau et y voir clair sans d\u00e9tendeur, ni masque. Vive Dalygaran\u00a0! Forc\u00e9ment l\u00e0-dessous c&rsquo;est fantastique. Et la lune de lac m&rsquo;est venue vous l&rsquo;aurez devin\u00e9 par analogie avec l&rsquo;\u00e9toile de mer\u00a0: la forme et le milieu. Dans mon esprit, cette sortie est une sorte de cadeau du Commandant \u00e0 \u00c9lisa. On peut imaginer qu&rsquo;il aime ce style de p\u00e9riple et qu&rsquo;il voulait partager cela avec celle qui ne cesse de l&rsquo;\u00e9tonner depuis son arriv\u00e9e.<br \/>\nVoil\u00e0 tout ce que je peux dire \u00e0 propos de ce douzi\u00e8me chapitre, deuxi\u00e8me partie.<!--:--><!--:en--><\/p>\n<style type=\"text\/css\"><!--\n@page { margin: 2cm }\n\t\tP { margin-bottom: 0.21cm }\n--><\/style>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">At school\u00a0: what is it going to happen at school\u00a0? What could be the questions of the children\u00a0by the way ?<br \/>\nIt was easy to me to feel this mutual inti between Beth and his young audience. Her, a bit anxious of their curiosity, and them, facing a mysterious being. But it has to remain children qurstions. In the French version I use the familiar \u00ab\u00a0tu\u00a0\u00bb form, like it would happen on Earth. And the first question was about teh eventuality of a boyfriend. I don&rsquo;t know if childhood is something universal, but I considered it so\u00a0: kids are the same everywhere.<br \/>\nAnd there was something else that I knew\u00a0: I didn&rsquo;t want this exchange to last too long. So the idea that it has to be interrupted crossed my mind. And Beth&rsquo;s abilities would be behind. So I had the idea of the gold ring hymn which would make Beth go into a trance and see in the heart of the children.<br \/>\nThis is their fervour which make her able to see. It can be figured out that by singing, they can see the gold ring. They were thinking about it and this collective picture has touched her deep inside, and was drawn on the board.<br \/>\nFrom Beth Earthling viewpoint or form Dalygarians&rsquo;, this gift was unexpected.<br \/>\n<a name=\"ctl00_cC_ucResEM_lblTranslation\"><\/a>Beth, who untill now managed her abilities as if they were normal suddently understand she is overwhelmed\u00a0? Frangrant Flower from Isadora Plain makes her smile again by teasing her husband, showing that way her support and her friendship.<br \/>\nLogically, the chapter would have ended there. But I wanted something else. Something with the Major.<br \/>\nAnd here he comes by Star and Flower home to pick Beth for an outdoor journey\u00a0: to the famous Great Waterfall the children have talked about. This one to one meeting was supposed to warm up the relationships between those two beings, considering the bad begining they have both taken.<br \/>\nThe dive will be the only moment she will really be angry at him.<br \/>\nHe takes up his intructor role again by learning her how to swim like a Dalygarian. I have to say this is one of my dream to be able to swim underwater for a long time without a dive bottle and a mask. Hurrah for Dalygaran\u00a0! Of course, under there, this is fantastic. And the moonfish as you can imagine is born by analogy with the starfish.<br \/>\nIn my mind, this outing is a sort of present from the Major to Beth. It is easy to imagine he likes this style of journey and that he wanted to share that with the one who don&rsquo;t stop to surprised him since she arrived.<br \/>\nAnd here is all that I can say about this chapter 12, part 2.<\/p>\n<p><!--:--><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Voici donc la suite du chapitre o\u00f9 je craignais tellement de ne pas avoir assez \u00e0 dire qu&rsquo;au final il en vaut deux \ud83d\ude09 Here is the next part of the chapter which I fear so much not to have&hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/annierun.net\/blog\/2014\/06\/a-propos-du-douxieme-chapitre-deuxieme-partie\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continuer la lecture <span class=\"meta-nav\">&rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":562,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":""},"categories":[38,3],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-230","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-fiction","category-coulisse"],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/annierun.net\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/05\/Fotolia_38625015_XS.jpg?fit=366%2C328&ssl=1","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/p4u88f-3I","jetpack-related-posts":[{"id":164,"url":"https:\/\/annierun.net\/blog\/2014\/05\/a-propos-du-septieme-chapitre\/","url_meta":{"origin":230,"position":0},"title":"A propos du septi\u00e8me chapitre","author":"Annie","date":"15 mai 2014","format":false,"excerpt":"Enfin \u00c9lisa a pu voyager et voir les mondes dont elle r\u00eavait. On en d\u00e9couvre plus sur ses capacit\u00e9s et plus aussi sur les deux personnages qui surveillent ses voyages.Finally Beth travelled and saw what she has always dreamt to see. We discover more on her abilities and more on\u2026","rel":"","context":"Dans &quot;C\u00f4t\u00e9 Fiction&quot;","block_context":{"text":"C\u00f4t\u00e9 Fiction","link":"https:\/\/annierun.net\/blog\/category\/fiction\/"},"img":{"alt_text":"","src":"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/annierun.net\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/05\/Fotolia_38625015_XS.jpg?fit=366%2C328&ssl=1&resize=350%2C200","width":350,"height":200},"classes":[]},{"id":226,"url":"https:\/\/annierun.net\/blog\/2014\/06\/chapitre-12-sur-dalygaran-seconde-partie\/","url_meta":{"origin":230,"position":1},"title":"Chapitre 12 &#8211; Sur Dalygaran &#8211; Seconde partie","author":"Annie","date":"24 juin 2014","format":false,"excerpt":"Le lendemain c\u2019\u00e9tait le jour aux balanciers. Je suis rentr\u00e9e tranquillement chez mes h\u00f4tes, avant l\u2019\u00e9preuve de l\u2019apr\u00e8s-midi : l\u2019\u00e9cole. A l\u2019heure convenue, on est venu me chercher. Je me suis retrouv\u00e9e dans un immense amphith\u00e9\u00e2tre plein \u00e0 craquer. Derri\u00e8re moi un tableau \u00e9lectronique et un stylo. Je me suis\u2026","rel":"","context":"Dans &quot;I - Quand on y pense&quot;","block_context":{"text":"I - Quand on y pense","link":"https:\/\/annierun.net\/blog\/category\/fiction\/pense\/"},"img":{"alt_text":"","src":"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/annierun.net\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/cascade.jpg?fit=340%2C240&ssl=1&resize=350%2C200","width":350,"height":200},"classes":[]},{"id":272,"url":"https:\/\/annierun.net\/blog\/2014\/07\/chapitre-15-retour-sur-terre\/","url_meta":{"origin":230,"position":2},"title":"Chapitre 15 &#8211; Retour sur Terre","author":"Annie","date":"13 juillet 2014","format":false,"excerpt":"Le lendemain matin, je suis r\u00e9veill\u00e9e de bonne heure et je descends de ma chambre avec mes derniers dessins. J\u2019indique celui qui est \u00e0 donner \u00e0 l\u2019\u00e9cole. J\u2019offre ceux qui restent, dont mon auto-portrait \u00e0 mes h\u00f4tes qui sont ravis. Juste avant mon d\u00e9part, Fleur Parfum\u00e9e de la Plaine d\u2019Isadora\u2026","rel":"","context":"Dans &quot;I - Quand on y pense&quot;","block_context":{"text":"I - Quand on y pense","link":"https:\/\/annierun.net\/blog\/category\/fiction\/pense\/"},"img":{"alt_text":"","src":"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/annierun.net\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/levee_soleil.jpg?fit=340%2C240&ssl=1&resize=350%2C200","width":350,"height":200},"classes":[]},{"id":1942,"url":"https:\/\/annierun.net\/blog\/2026\/04\/reprendre-son-histoire-et-oser-la-metamorphose-accompagnee\/","url_meta":{"origin":230,"position":3},"title":"Reprendre son histoire et oser la m\u00e9tamorphose accompagn\u00e9e","author":"Annie","date":"5 avril 2026","format":false,"excerpt":"Apr\u00e8s mon exp\u00e9rience d\u2019\u00e9criture collective d\u2019un polar audio avec 8000 Mondes, j\u2019ai \u00e9t\u00e9 tent\u00e9e de revenir \u00e0 quelque chose de plus personnel. Restait une question simple qui me perturbait\u00a0: devais-je \u00e9crire une nouvelle histoire, ou reprendre la premi\u00e8re, celle qui m\u2019avait occup\u00e9e pendant trois ans\u00a0? Je l\u2019avais \u00e9crite au fil\u2026","rel":"","context":"Dans &quot;C\u00f4t\u00e9 Fiction&quot;","block_context":{"text":"C\u00f4t\u00e9 Fiction","link":"https:\/\/annierun.net\/blog\/category\/fiction\/"},"img":{"alt_text":"","src":"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/annierun.net\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2026\/04\/Metamorphose-de-papier.png?fit=1200%2C800&ssl=1&resize=350%2C200","width":350,"height":200,"srcset":"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/annierun.net\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2026\/04\/Metamorphose-de-papier.png?fit=1200%2C800&ssl=1&resize=350%2C200 1x, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/annierun.net\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2026\/04\/Metamorphose-de-papier.png?fit=1200%2C800&ssl=1&resize=525%2C300 1.5x, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/annierun.net\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2026\/04\/Metamorphose-de-papier.png?fit=1200%2C800&ssl=1&resize=700%2C400 2x, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/annierun.net\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2026\/04\/Metamorphose-de-papier.png?fit=1200%2C800&ssl=1&resize=1050%2C600 3x"},"classes":[]},{"id":107,"url":"https:\/\/annierun.net\/blog\/2014\/04\/chapitre-3-avec-les-amis\/","url_meta":{"origin":230,"position":4},"title":"Chapitre 3 &#8211; Avec les amis","author":"Annie","date":"15 avril 2014","format":false,"excerpt":"Marcher n\u2019\u00e9tait pas suffisant. Il m\u2019a fallu courir. Courir le plus vite que je pouvais. A travers le parc et ses grands arbres. Jusqu\u2019\u00e0 ce que j\u2019\u00e9touffe litt\u00e9ralement. Alors je me suis assise sur un banc et j\u2019ai envoy\u00e9 un message \u00e0 mes potes pour boire un verre. L\u00e0 je\u2026","rel":"","context":"Dans &quot;I - Quand on y pense&quot;","block_context":{"text":"I - Quand on y pense","link":"https:\/\/annierun.net\/blog\/category\/fiction\/pense\/"},"img":{"alt_text":"","src":"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/annierun.net\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/biere.jpg?fit=340%2C240&ssl=1&resize=350%2C200","width":350,"height":200},"classes":[]},{"id":222,"url":"https:\/\/annierun.net\/blog\/2014\/06\/chapitre-12-sur-dalygaran-premiere-partie\/","url_meta":{"origin":230,"position":5},"title":"Chapitre 12 &#8211; Sur Dalygaran &#8211; Premi\u00e8re partie","author":"Annie","date":"17 juin 2014","format":false,"excerpt":"Depuis que je suis arriv\u00e9e sur Dalygaran, mes journ\u00e9es ont \u00e9t\u00e9 bien remplies. Mes matins sont consacr\u00e9s \u00e0 l\u2019exercice physique, sous la direction du Commandant. Mon corps est un nouveau mod\u00e8le dont les capacit\u00e9s doivent \u00eatre test\u00e9es m\u2019a-t-on dit. J\u2019ai quand m\u00eame la sensation que c\u2019est plut\u00f4t moi que l\u2019on\u2026","rel":"","context":"Dans &quot;I - Quand on y pense&quot;","block_context":{"text":"I - Quand on y pense","link":"https:\/\/annierun.net\/blog\/category\/fiction\/pense\/"},"img":{"alt_text":"","src":"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/annierun.net\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/06\/pendule.jpg?fit=340%2C240&ssl=1&resize=350%2C200","width":350,"height":200},"classes":[]}],"jetpack_likes_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/annierun.net\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/230","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/annierun.net\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/annierun.net\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/annierun.net\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/annierun.net\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=230"}],"version-history":[{"count":4,"href":"https:\/\/annierun.net\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/230\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1615,"href":"https:\/\/annierun.net\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/230\/revisions\/1615"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/annierun.net\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/562"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/annierun.net\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=230"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/annierun.net\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=230"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/annierun.net\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=230"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}