It has been the more difficult to write until today. And I really don’t like it. I find it bad written. It is not a one shot writting this time. I rewrite some pieces. And I am still not statisfy of the result.
At the beginning the idea was to describe a little paradise.
I even wanted to call the chapter “gates of heaven”, but the idea of the nearest world – Proxiterra – seemed to fit better with what I wrote.
Maybe for this kind of writing I shouldn’t have start in English. I hear english dialogues often – in TV shows, and it is easy for me to imagine some. But a description is something else. It is another level of writing that I am not used to. I have read one or two books in English but it was a long time ago. I certainly have to read another – thin – one, to see how it could be done. I need examples. I need to learn.
This chapter was a really frustating experience ! So next time, I will try French version first. And we’ll see !
Finally, I rewrite this chapter today 21/04. Always something wrong with it. But a little better.